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| Esquirella 2006-09-22 ch 1,  | abuseInterestinf setup. |
| Delayed Epiphany 2006-09-21 ch 1, | abuseHey Interesting start, I like it. The demon siblings seem really cool, I wonder what it is that they lost. Maybe some description on what some of the characters look like, such as Steven and the grandmother, especially Brian because i'm guessing he's the main character. There's a few awkward sentences or grammer, but that happens to us all so no worries. Other than that, very clean. Great work, I hope you update soon! much luv shoes |