Oh, what a gorgeous image. I love your use of rhyme in the second line, and yes, just pretty. Keep writing! :)

mm, night before the rain

everyone has their favorite depiction of it

and this is quite near minebut with a touch less moisture

That truly is a spectacle, creates such wonderful imagery, great work

this has stuck nicely to the proper haiku format, and its nicely written. Thanks for the review. ~Bex xx

You manage to show us this wonderful scene in 17 syllables. Gorgeous.

I adore your haikus.

Love, Alice

I am in awe of your haikus. This one even has some rhyme. Your imagery is astounding.

incredibly powerful image.

bravo! a shower of images with so few words. splendid. fantastic. like a cinderella night on parade...

Beautiful haiku. Great work.

Wonderful motion and visual aspects. This really swims vividly. Great haiku.

Wow.

I love how amazingly poetic and eloquent you are. It's amazing how much can be convayed in just three lines!

honestly, this is so beautiful. the image you manage to create and conjure up in this...its hauntingly vivid and beautiful.

A haiku that speaks much with very little. Thank you for the entertaining read, and I'll see you on your next update. - Arcane Devices