|Reviews for Despair|
| LovelessAngel 11/15/06 . chapter 1
wow,lovely is this.i feel the despair.
| classic violet 11/9/06 . chapter 1
I love the second & third stanzas.
| simpleplan13 10/30/06 . chapter 1
I love that last stanza... beautifully done
| SeaVoi 10/28/06 . chapter 1
"for what ink blotches, smiles, or laughter" thats line is so awsome. Rad poem dude.
| Moon-Chaser 10/24/06 . chapter 1
This is amazingly done. I felt the impact of the words and the feelings this poem gave me are familiar ones.
Keep it up.
Thanks for reviewing.
| B. M. Reed 10/22/06 . chapter 1
This is really a good poem. "Oh - life, how long I have yearned.." is my favorite line in the piece. It seems real, raw, and unbroken to me.
| mizu no kokoro 10/18/06 . chapter 1
hmm, very expressive. i liked the first stanza the most. good work
| dog-eared hanyou 10/12/06 . chapter 1
Ooh, so dark. It sounds very gloomy and...wet? I can visualize this being dunked in mud or ink. But that's because I'm weird. Anyways, very cool.
| Aku no Otaku 10/4/06 . chapter 1
| KonekOniko 9/27/06 . chapter 1
Ooh, I like this one a lot. I agree with Ka-chan though. It is a little empty, but I suppose that gives the poem it's element. Until next time )
| ViciousMan 9/26/06 . chapter 1
Some people feel like doing that when they learn about the harsh realities and cruelties of life..
Strong people seek to survive with the "weight" and try to change the reality of the world.
| Arichos 9/26/06 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so flowy, if i were saying this out loud, i'd be done with it in seconds. Its really beautiful, as it's dark feeling is emphasized so well through your poetry. *Claps*
| AllyCred 9/26/06 . chapter 1
I liked this but when i was reading it i didn't get as much emotion from your words as i usually do. It seemed kinda cold (empty?) and the words used seemed to take the feeling away from the poem. Maybe its just me, i'm tired, so maybe i'm not seeing the warmth. Anyway, i liked it, the imagery was good it just didn't have the depth of emotion i like for poems.
Lotsa Love AC
P.S. If i've never said this before, thank you so much for all the reviews, i really appreciate them and your critique of my work really means a lot! xx
| Ice and Snow 9/23/06 . chapter 1
wow...i think this is the first time i've read a bitter/angst piece from you. i really love it. it seems...empty though...?
| breezy nostrils 9/22/06 . chapter 1
sorry about the whole collaboration thing, but the poem that you were about despair turned out really well. nice work.