FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| LovelessAngel 2006-11-15 ch 1,  | abusewow,lovely is this.i feel the despair. |
| classic violet 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseI love the second & third stanzas. |
| simpleplan13 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abuseI love that last stanza... beautifully done |
| MR.SEAN 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuse"for what ink blotches, smiles, or laughter" thats line is so awsome. Rad poem dude. |
| Moon-Chaser 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is amazingly done. I felt the impact of the words and the feelings this poem gave me are familiar ones. Keep it up. Thanks for reviewing. |
| B. M. Reed 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is really a good poem. "Oh - life, how long I have yearned.." is my favorite line in the piece. It seems real, raw, and unbroken to me. |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abusehmm, very expressive. i liked the first stanza the most. good work keep writing |
| dog-eared hanyou 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abuseOoh, so dark. It sounds very gloomy and...wet? I can visualize this being dunked in mud or ink. But that's because I'm weird. Anyways, very cool. |
| Aku no Otaku 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abusenice descriptions |
| KonekOniko 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I like this one a lot. I agree with Ka-chan though. It is a little empty, but I suppose that gives the poem it's element. Until next time =) |
| ViciousMan 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abuseSome people feel like doing that when they learn about the harsh realities and cruelties of life.. Strong people seek to survive with the "weight" and try to change the reality of the world. |
| Arichos 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is so flowy, if i were saying this out loud, i'd be done with it in seconds. Its really beautiful, as it's dark feeling is emphasized so well through your poetry. *Claps* |
| AllyCred 2006-09-26 ch 1, | abuseI liked this but when i was reading it i didn't get as much emotion from your words as i usually do. It seemed kinda cold (empty?) and the words used seemed to take the feeling away from the poem. Maybe its just me, i'm tired, so maybe i'm not seeing the warmth. Anyway, i liked it, the imagery was good it just didn't have the depth of emotion i like for poems. Well done. Lotsa Love ~AC~ P.S.~~ If i've never said this before, thank you so much for all the reviews, i really appreciate them and your critique of my work really means a lot! xx |
| Ice and Snow 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abusewow...i think this is the first time i've read a bitter/angst piece from you. i really love it. it seems...empty though...? |
| breezy nostrils 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abusesorry about the whole collaboration thing, but the poem that you were about despair turned out really well. nice work. |