|Reviews for Beautiful Girl|
| The Candle Thief 7/13/07 . chapter 1
Hell, I look like a troll. Who's complaining? _
| LaineLove 6/12/07 . chapter 1
Wow this is really good I had to help a friend with an eating disorder and I still have to sometimes it's hard and I can really relate to this poem I hope you keep it up
| DarkBlysse 4/11/07 . chapter 1
Wow. I know how you feel. I've got a friend who's going through the same thing. I just can't understand why she does what she does, and it hurts me so much to know she's suffering like that.
Great work, and I hope your friend gets help for her problem.
| tesa131313 12/20/06 . chapter 1
Since you based this off an actual person it makes this poem very sad and powerful. Have you shown this to your friend? You should definately. It will show her you care
| bookface31 10/1/06 . chapter 1
Intense poetry, and it really strikes me hard because when I was younger, I had an eating disorder.
I don't anymore.
If you need any advice on how to help her, or what to do when you're having problems, just ask me. My e-mail is .
All you can do for now is be her friend, tell her how beautiful she is, help her when she's down, and take baby steps. You can do it!
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 9/24/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful job. Full of emotion, and very
| SirScott 9/21/06 . chapter 1
That was touching. I think more and more asre waking up and realizing that thin isn't beautiful.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott
| Alyssa's Attic 9/21/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful, i like how you have written it from a friends point of view you dont see that on here often, great job!
| Talia 9/21/06 . chapter 1
Such a pretty piece! You may want to fix 'dieing' thought. It's 'dying' that you want to use. :D