|Reviews for Giving Up|
| huimei 6/4/10 . chapter 1
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| RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur 6/20/09 . chapter 1
This is depressing. But in a good way, don't worry.
I can relate to this, & that's what made me like it so much. The same thing happens to me. I hardly ever find something that I can see in myself, & you've done that. Bravo.
Hmm...I got a little lost somewhere in the middle. I'm thinking this could be condensed a tad, not too much. It would make it a more pleasurable read, but that's just my opinion.
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| Renate Seline Zaz 9/3/08 . chapter 1
gak that is heartbreaking. ouch. really liked it.
| Ineffably Me 2/5/07 . chapter 1
I like how in a way you told him, that you wouldn't compromise, because if he loved you, he would woo you.
| Isis ShadowWolf 1/4/07 . chapter 1
This sounds heart-breakingly familiar...
I love the lucid display of thoughts in this one. Sometimes the truth is more poetic than figurative language, and it takes talent to decide when to use one or the other. I like this very much.
| x account closed x 11/13/06 . chapter 1
i loved this, it hurt in a badbreakup way that you tell yourself you want to forget, yet you keep reliving it every night in dreamhell.
| cycle.of.ashes 11/6/06 . chapter 1
Agh. I hate this feeling. You conveyed it quite well, it made my heart hurt all over again. I like the lines "So here I am,/ once again sitting broken-hearted/ In front of this mercifully neutral computer screen..." Yep, that's good. Awesome job, keep it up!
| Sweet Persephone 10/11/06 . chapter 1
I loved it. It was written in an easy-to-read-keep-your-attention-way. Wish I knew the word for that :) I especially like the very last part. Keep up the good work.
| Fireyforce 10/3/06 . chapter 1
I understand exactly what you are saying here. Check out my poems, I think you'll like them. Once your heart is broken and you know that feeling you never want to experience it again so you build up defenses, we all do that. Great poem.
| Mabisco 10/2/06 . chapter 1
i really like the last stanza, is this poem actually about youself? it just seems like you put a lot of feeling into itits real good!
| Bonfire Of The Sanities 9/30/06 . chapter 1
I've always said that in true art, you can see th artists soul...and I definetly did here...amazing job
| happypills03 9/28/06 . chapter 1
i know the feeling.. as soon as you let ur walls down and let someone in.. they hurt you..
| emizulu 9/26/06 . chapter 1
Aw...you're so good at capturing emotion and putting it into poetry format. It's so perfect, so accurate. I give you a standing ovation. :D
| ive-got-sunshine 9/22/06 . chapter 1
WOW! this is great, i can relate so perfectly... it's almost like you were telling the story to me, like we had been friends before...
| CrazyTurtles 9/21/06 . chapter 1
This is really good. I can totaly relate. This is the story of my life. But for me, it had a happy ending. I hope yours does too.