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| caralene 2007-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseThat was a pretty interesting start... I can see the light and easy way you're going on about this. :-) |
| shairimean 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseHaha, the last part was really funny- she thought it was her teddy bear trying to climb back into bed! And now the real story starts right- although I canm't help thinking you've abandoned ship and disappeared from the face of the earth since you haven't updated in a long time. But I shall continue to be optimistic and think you're just energising...whatever needs energising? Anyway, the summary sounds really intriguing, hence the reason I'm here. I really like the idea of the plot, i just hope I get to see the whole extent of it rather than just this one chapter. Your irst chapter was as all first chapter's go but the wriitng is good and the end part was very funy- as was the 'im gay' part- really didn't see that one coming. Could Ryan be a future friend? Anyway, I hope you decide to update soon and clear up the mystsery for us. |
| CHIIJOY 2007-03-13 ch 1, | abuseA guy in her bed? Now that doesn't seem too scary if logical thought was exluded from the equation. Anywho, please update soon so I can read about this green eyed blanket hog! hehe :D |
| a bitter kiss. 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuse“I love you, baby.” “I love you more.” Haha, I seriously gag when I see people like that... haha. Well, here I am to return a review you left me, and thanks again! And by the way, you should continue this! It was written really well! |
| clair-a-net 2006-09-24 ch 1, | abusewhos in her bed? more please |
| Aneedegorarose 2006-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was nine words, but apart from that I loved it.. I loved the ending of the chapter - THE CLIFFHANGER- But the green eyes sound hot already. Can't wait to read more |
| Snow Wolf Alpha 2006-09-21 ch 1, | abuseAhh, cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next.Please Update soon. |
| ... 2006-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's so very suspenseful! You must write the next chapter... |