Very interesting piece. You take a lot of ideas that don't seem to have much to do with each other, but you tie them all together so perfectly, it just seems to fit.

I also like how you work in the dialgou. It's so natural, and it gives that part an interesting tone.

Irony is the sharpest sword.

Good poem. Made me think (which is a somewhat rare event).

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this is amazingkeep it

the last line was gorgeous. (:

I want to print this out and paste it on my wall. that's how much I love it.

i love a softer world.

i love this poem.

"if i'm lucky, then,only in the split inside my heart."PERFECT line, I love it

hell yes it is. that first line...i don't know...there was just something in that grabbed me and wouldn't stop.

this has a lot of memories for me, even though i really never remember running with scissors when i was young. it's like walking into a coffee shop: you always feel those bittersweet nostalgic feelings tugging at you. lovely.