i really like this :)

I love you...

Sorry... I have been trying to figure out the edit thing for ages! Yay! I've never been able to put paragraphs in properly and i always feel so stupid when it turns out wrong! Thankyou thankyou! Do you know how to put section breaks? Is there some place to find out all this stuff or am i just naturally stupid?

Now i've had my rant... btw your poem gave me shivers... It was refreshing yet creepy... Oh how complicated the world is... I'm looking forward to more of your "work"... I shall read it, sometime soon hopefully... Time flees from me...

Anyway, thanks heaps!

Love Wah

hey! thankyou so much for your review, really appreciate it! wow this is a really touching poem and we can all see how much thought has gone into this... it would take me so long to write something like this because of all the emotions and thoughts in it... that's a good thing though. you have a great frame of mind... i enjoy reading your poetry. peace and love from holly.

Very interesting. In fact, I have a poem a lot like it (but I like your's better). Keep writing!