Absolutley beautiful! Your amazing vocabulary and excellent flow really pulled it off!

very powerful. i like your use of language.

keep writing

Woot! Very good *happy tear* Your so fricking good with words...so jealous...*sigh* And I'm very sorry it took so long to review this...I'm pressed for time. But it is worth it to read this. It is so intense and well-written. ^_^ Riane.

I enjoyed this piece.Your vocabulary and your use of words worked well here!