love it!

Ri

Aww...your character's name is Aaliyah too!

Sorry, I got so excited.

Anyway, great going.

Ri

WOW! This is quite rightly the most amazing book i have evr read, and i am not bluffing...i just wanted to add the important fact that i just ate jellybeans...IN A CAN!! amazing or what?

I absolutely loved this story. Though it did lack details, it was very precise with important information and told the story beautifully. I love the Boss and assistant cliche- Definitely one of my favorite stories.

when i read the beginning of this chapter, i thought "crap! well there goes their relationship."
but in the end. . .aw amazing
(yeah sorry if i don't make sense) XD
my favorite chapter!

I really liked this story ;D

Aw. :) But, I have to agree that the last bit seemed a little rushed. Unfortunately, I can't think of any suggestions for fixing it. :(
Anyway, it was lots of fun.

hey nice story .^^

I really appreciate the flashback about Aiden's past, thanks! Oh, I now think that Pooka is interesting.

Hmm... I agree with Aiden that Vance does have a heart. Otherwise, he would never, ever admit that "it started out as lust". :)

Oh wow, Aiden is so lucky! He caused a fire, but he managed to get away scot-free. By the way, I like his remark about vampires who leave their meals lying around. Hahaha...

Oh gosh, I used to think that Hitler was merely misunderstood, so no wonder fellow humans considered me "sick", hahaha. I guess that Aiden and Vance are lovers, but maybe I am very, very wrong. :)

Wow, I noticed this story on "Fiction with Bite", and I am glad that I have clicked on the link. Hmm, I like your concept, since Vance is the Devil, literally.

love it! great story! ;)

Cool..I enjoyed reading the story. :)