That was extremely sweet. A wonderful read.

This is a really wonderful piece. The ending is just simply adorable, leaving you with a warm feeling. Love it. :D

This is just... Wow... Wonderfully composed and 'woven', I just love everything about it; how you put in bits of description that wasn't needed for the plot, but added to the suspense, how Ashton would rather lock himself away from any human contact to avoid Rhonan, and many other details. You made me cry, I loved it that much.

Lala. How cute.

I'm so glad I read this. You have no idea. I am in loooooooove with Rhonan and Ashton. I would kill to have them in my closet collection of "Pairs I Love".

I almost want more. Unfortunately, judging by the publishing date, I won't be getting more, which is just too bad.

I think I have to stalk your profile and favourites page now. o

Thanks for the read!

SHO SHWEET! D'AWWW!

A really well-written story, that even though I detest fantasy with a passion, I enjoyed immensely.

I really have nothing bad to say. Except that at I found the way the prince spoke rather funny, that's all.

I think I want myself a cute little mage.

Aw! That is all )

A well-written story with an adorable main character and a sweet ending that leaves you with a warm fluffy feeling. What more could you ask for?

Congrats ! This is the kind of story I would like to re-read from time to time.

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Ah! *flails around*

That was adorable. :3

Wow...this was amazing!

I cried alot, LOL.

I loved the ending though, I knew it! :D

Awesome story! You should totally write

more like this :)

Ashton is so cute. The ending was very sweet. I couldn't stop laughing when Ashton got covered with all that yellow powder. XD

I squealed at how cute they are. :D :D :D

Um, wow. I don't think I've ever read slash fantasy that's so good. In fact, I was so amazed that I only have nice things to say about the entire thing and nothing constructive. I hope that's okay.

Seriously though, that was amazing! In all my life I have only come across one other fantasy story and it was Harry Potter fanfiction. You did a really good job giving the story an epic fantasy feel. Right down to the wars and the mages and the fear of magic. I'm just totally in love with it. And I really can't get over how epically fantasy it is. YOU DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND.

Also, very cute ending although I found Ashton suddenly crying slightly...unrealistic but that's probably because you didn't really build up his frustration as much as I would have liked. That's pretty much all I can remember that I didn't like.

Again your combination of the fantasy element and Ashton's love were just fabulous. The story had a very well done plot that you wove in so well with Ashton's love. Ah, totally loved this!

Okay, that was the sweetest thing. :)) Bravo!

Ohh...that's so cute... I'm sorry, I know this is such an unsubstantial review...