Ah! *flails around*

That was adorable. :3

Wow...this was amazing!
I cried alot, LOL.
I loved the ending though, I knew it! >:D
Awesome story! You should totally write
more like this :)

Ashton is so cute. The ending was very sweet. I couldn't stop laughing when Ashton got covered with all that yellow powder. XD

I squealed at how cute they are. :D :D :D

Um, wow. I don't think I've ever read slash fantasy that's so good. In fact, I was so amazed that I only have nice things to say about the entire thing and nothing constructive. I hope that's okay.

Seriously though, that was amazing! In all my life I have only come across one other fantasy story and it was Harry Potter fanfiction. You did a really good job giving the story an epic fantasy feel. Right down to the wars and the mages and the fear of magic. I'm just totally in love with it. And I really can't get over how epically fantasy it is. YOU DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND.

Also, very cute ending although I found Ashton suddenly crying slightly...unrealistic but that's probably because you didn't really build up his frustration as much as I would have liked. That's pretty much all I can remember that I didn't like.

Again your combination of the fantasy element and Ashton's love were just fabulous. The story had a very well done plot that you wove in so well with Ashton's love. Ah, totally loved this!

Okay, that was the sweetest thing. :)) Bravo!

Ohh...that's so cute... I'm sorry, I know this is such an unsubstantial review...

i came across this story by happy coincidence and i really quite like it. although things fell together perhaps a bit too easily in the end, i understand the want to not make the boys suffer any more than they already had. it was a very entertaining story. and quite cute.

kayot! XD

D'aw!
That's all I can say. I'm in a happy cloud of fluffiness right now, thanks to this story~ :DD

^__^ I really liked this story because the characters felt so real, and the politics were well done and believable.
The whole thing was very creative, and the ending just left you with a satisfied feeling. Great job! ^__6

Very cute.

cute, I like it.

This was a great piece. I wish it could continue, but the ending is perfect as is.

wow!! YAY! i love it