you knowi think romance is mostly depicted between men and women

that is kind of sad

God, this was so beautiul and intense! Your writing style it great. It's honest, touching and really nice to read.

It's short, but that doesn't matter. The story's complete, there doesn't need to be explained anything else, it's perfect the way it is.

I LOVED the last line. You deserve so much more reviews for this!

X Lien

Beautiful. Erotic. Morbid. And very poetic. Wonderful job, I like it very much.

Wow, that's intense. And so emotional and awesome and you WROTE! Awesome. Keep 'em coming. And I love that feel of it, like you're there yourself, and you can feel the cold, before-awakening kinda pressing down. Yeh. Great.