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Bonfire Of The Sanities 2006-10-04 . chapter 1
Very cool...though, if I may make a suggestion...I would drop "Verbal"...and just say "Your voice is like advil"...somehow it seems to flow better...but that's just me...very good job anyway

Peace, Love Rock and RollBen
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