only one thing I have constructive criticism about: in louisiana, the ground is the consistency of thick pudding, most of the time, so atacombs don't really have a place here; they'd collapse, due to the infirm ground. other than that it was a delightful story, although it wasn't rife with references to Louisiana, although I do appreciate that a non native of the state decided to write a piece about the state.

Very interesting story in a sort of Anne Rice type of way. Maybe you could add more description overall, though. *faery tragedy