Very angsty. And interesting. Nicely written.

Woo yeah! You have such amazing imagery and you provide loads of really cool things for the reader to think about. I love the following lines: "Voluntary captive", "Oh, wondering ponderables...", "If only I could rip apart the silk!", "repulse violently", (the beginning line), "broken tipped pen"... etcetera. Impressed:me. [Does that make sense?]