wowowwowowowow I love this chapter! Please update soon, I'll be waiting! :P

-Alex

great story!

excellent job!

Woah, loving this story! One question though.. I thought Noel was deaf? A couple of times you referred to him hearing people (ie Amber was talking to him as well as the little girls saying goodbye to him at the playground) just thought I'd mention that. Otherwise, this is great and I hope you update soon :)

Alex

this is kind of intense lol.

Sounds like a great story is coming out of this! Keep writing! Awesome first chapter!