I liked the story, though I'm not much of a vampire nut, but this story was pretty different. I'd like to see this continued. It was a little hard to get into at first but you had me hooked by the end.

And the character with the glasses...reminded me of the Black Night in Scarecrow..well at least the glasses and major **-kicking part did. :-D

Nice one... I look forward to reading more.