Again this poem is like me and my girlfriend, I get angry real easy too and i lash out but not at her and i never will and tbh I dont think your Adrian will ever lash out at you either tbh im sure he has more self control than that :) i loved this one too

Wow, well said. Great job. Keep writing!

Anna _

This poem really scared me. I am worried about you even though I don't know you and I truly am praying that you are not in a relationship like this. Best of luck! My prayers are with you...

"fear of the one is love" the first line already portrayed the sadness of the persona. and it's one of my favorite lines. just six words, but it said a lot. (:

hm.i say fuck like there is no tomorrow.

if this is a real problem, please leave him...right away the truth is the wall your talking about WILL be you someday. great poem i deffinatly feel your emotions!

this is beautiful. you can really feal the pain as the narrator writes it. as usual, just ace.