Wow. this is one of those poems that really makes you think about the kind of stuff you see. She's just a girl in a photo, but there's so much more to it. You kept it vague as well, which I think really worked with the poem. I totally love it, and I'm going to add it to my favorites.
wow what a powerful image. this peice makes me think about people like the girl in this. its true they will only be a corn memory, nuthing more. its sad and destirbing, but so powerful.excellent peice.
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