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| Kylie1403 2006-10-04 ch 31,  | abuseyour confusing me with all these stoires and chnages |
| Behind-these-eyes 2006-10-03 ch 30, | abuseI just want to say that i love this story, and that you should do whatever you think is best for the stories. personally, i say it's almost impossible not to improve a story, so if you feel the need to make these even better, go for it. as long as i get to read them sometime, i'll be happy. |
| LadyArrin 2006-10-03 ch 29, | abuseNO! Keep it going! Don't leave us hanging! ARGH!I want to know what happens to the baby! |
| Allison Smith 2006-10-03 ch 29, | abuseah send me whatever you have, love. pleease? |
| doctorvg 2006-10-03 ch 29, | abuseReally love both Grace-Jacob and Diana-John stories. I really loved 'Fatherly Love'. You bought out the inner emotions of both. Even though it was fiction.. it seemed as though the characters were unfolding in front of my eyes. I was wondering whether you will be posting without Diana-John in Grace-Jacob story or vice-versa. Thanks for posting a good one. Keep writing. |
| under the influence 2006-10-03 ch 28, | abuseuh oh...don't scream, but how far along is she? |
| Rayne Logan 2006-10-03 ch 27, | abuseOh. I love the connections. And also that Grace has figured out what's going on. (I almost wrote Gabriel instead of Grace then... XD You can tell that I've just updated my story Actually. It's interesting that the names Gabriel and Grace both have connections to the bible. *COUGH* ANYWAY.) Yay! My favourite scene where Diana asks to help John with the business. I like how she dresses up to try and get the 'job'. *giggles* Keep writing. :) |
| under the influence 2006-10-03 ch 26, | abuseanother good chapter...i'm looking forward to more grace/diana... i hope my email didn't upset you... |
| bitterpaper 2006-10-02 ch 26, | abuseJacob can't be trusted?! Oh please tell me it's not true! :Anxiously awaits for you to explain: Thank you for reviewing my little piece! I'm actually thinking about making it into a story, but I have a lot of ideas for other stories too. |
| Allison Smith 2006-10-02 ch 24, | abuseyarg. silly computers... Jennie, I would love for you to continue this story, but if you're not feeling it, then the rest of it will just feel forced... so so what you will. I actually rather like the Idea of interweaving the three threads of these stories before getting to John and Diana in all seriousness. Although, If you do it that way, I'm thinking that you'd have to weave the sequel for John and Diana into the sequel for Kayla and friend... That, I think might end up better over all. But again, this is your choice. * oh yeah, watch your spacing between words. every now and then you forget to put a space between two words.. |
| Allison Smith 2006-10-02 ch 25, | abuselol. Rayne Logan... if you're reading this, I suggest you read the other version of this story. *is incredibly amused by your suggestion to "lock them in a room and see what happens"* |
| Rayne Logan 2006-10-02 ch 24, | abuseGoddamnit, John's far too good. He needs to let go and tell Di exactly how he feels... and then DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT. Can't we lock them both in a room and see what happens? xD; The comforting scene is great. I adore it. John's cute there... but once again, he stops. Damn him :P |
| under the influence 2006-10-01 ch 24, | abuseI finally got to read and you gave me an idea...thanks!! the chappies are good...poor John! |
| Kylie1403 2006-10-01 ch 23, | abuse:O you killed his dad! :'( |
| Prosperer 2006-10-01 ch 22, | abuseSTILL INTERESTED!=) |