hey!

I can really relate to this poem. I was able to get a good sense of the pining this poor girl had (or has), and the poem flowed well. I especially liked the last four lines "Yet it's a forbidden love/ And there's not much I can do/ Except sit here and pine for the boy/ Sitting just two seats back/".

Sillygoose

nice poem and i totally get how she feels =) i was in that situation before, but i just completely got over it when i find a better guy =)