Wow, you know, I really consisdered cutting and pasting the good points of my two previous reviews for your stories here, you finaaly had Nocte kick some **, the ending was a bit hurried but you built up great tension towards the end. Greta Work Again, Keep up your most recent story.

hi! Loved your story! I'm done reading it but I'm leaving a review on this chapter... =] Anyways, amazing read... but, I never realized that it was THIRD installment until I went looking for its sequel. =[ oh well. Just wanted to say: great story! can't wait to read the others!

Awesome! Nocte Yin just keeps getting better and better! I don't think that I am a very big fan of Delano though. He seemed rather fast to pull a gun on Nocte while Morven was accepting. I hope that she doesn't just fall back into his arms or something latter. But now I need to go start part 4! I can't wait!

wonderful work! i cried and i cried...and i cried...and i cried...haha. amazing! I wish Delano and Nocte would have worked out. But I always had a suspicious feeling about Delano being a Yang...but that's because I'm such a romance/drama junkie. heehee...

Keep up your lovely writing!

! That was a masterpiece, I mean WOW. I cannot wait to read the sequel. Oh, and I don't know why but I get the impression that Noir has a thing for Nocte. Does he? I think he should, I like him better than Delano.!
-Seraphic Deviltry

ok so for three days nocte has consumed my very being. holy @$@%&@ cow! this is the best thing i have read on this site, period. and sort of like nocte all i ever do is read this stuff so yes you should be very flattered! oh dear god. . . i must have more! it is summer now! where is the nocte?!?! you couln't have died could you! *GASP* seriously... you can't be dead... YOU CAN'T! ok well technically you can be NO! YOU CAN'T! I FORBID IT! COME BACK AND FINISH THIS! seriously though if you died... i think i would die, it's just that good. nocte i mean, not us being dead... teehee. but seriously (i am aware that i've said that alot, but come on, this is SERIOUS) you have to hurry and write the next one. SUMMER. you said wait till summer. well i've waited! (for five minutes) where is it?! i'm slightly panicing because delano HAS to still love her, and she HAS to end up seeing him again! and holy #$%&! you freaking killed AMAN! well no... what's her face did but still. IT WAS ALL YOU! and no matter that she lived, she still DIED! very few things move me to emotion and let me tell you. THAT WAS A VERY. FEW. THING! i think after i write this i'm gunna go reread that whole chapter again. it was so sad, so powerful, so moving. a climax at its best! i seriously (just deal with it. i like the word) have thought of nothing but nocte for three days. even away from the computer it was always, oh shnikees what happens when she does that? or ahhaahah what a stupid villain! or oh dear god! i swear if she's dead when i get back to that computer...! i can honestly say that i love nocte unconditionally. i was rooting for evil nocte and when she fought herself to be god nocte i was still rooting for nocte. i love her! she so funny and just HUMAN! its great to have a character thats not super confident all the time conquering foes and fears. nocte has troubles just like normal people, albeit on a much mightier and maleficent scale but you get the picture. on a final note just know that i'm waiting avidly for the story to continue. your effervescent fan - morgan

hm...
enteresting...*taps fingers together*
i shall keep reading...

Wow, I cant believe I never got around to reviewing this chapter. I must say that I loved the ending it was cool when Noir and Paine came to help Nocte out(I'm secretly wooting for Nocte/Noir, dont tell anyone :P) Oh, and theres one thing that confused me a bit is Aman dead? The ending of this chapter was really sad, I like Nocte's father- he really cares about her. At first I really didnt like him since he pretty much let the elders sentence he to death but once I found out that he fought for her and took out Great-Aunt Nox for her I was like aw. Anyway I cant wait for the sequal which hopefully will be out soon since it's summer *hint hint* Dont rush though :)

p.s- Hell Dragons kick butt!

Just wanted to let you know much I loved this story. A lovable character, a great conflict, an AMAZING plot, and a lot of updates! I literally CANNOT WAIT for the fourth installment.

But there are a few things...
1)You seem to have a hard time spelling dying. You keep on spelling it dieing, so just for future reference...
2) There are a few subject/verb agreement errors, nothing big. You could easily catch them in a once over.
3) I noticed on further/farther mistake. Also, there are other areas where you confuse homonyms such as pass and past. Just be careful.
4) I think (tentatively) that there were a few spots you messed up your Yin/Yang thing, but I could CERTAINLY be reading it wrong.

But even with these minor things, I LOVE this story. Please begin posting the next one ASAP. I just cannot get this story out of my mind, you have no idea.

Ok, so I had no idea that there were two other Nocte stories before this one, I just saw it on someone's favorites list and decided to have a go at it. And I loved it. Original storyline, original plot. Very awesome. You took a classic family feud situation and made it your own. Bravo. I will be reading the other stories, and waiting for the fourth installment.

YAY I AM MENTIONED~

I shall wait faithfully. I wanna write something, too, but I'm stuck with all these ideas. How do you keep track of your characters? I'm forever lost with mine X_X

great ending...i'll review when school starts again, cuz that's when i'll have the time...ironic, isn't it??

in august

As long as the installment comes out, I am happy.

*is happy*

i.. LOVE IT :D

i can't wait for the sequel :D
i hope delano and her make up =3

*goes into hopeless romantic mode*

good luck =D
great story =)

yay! More hell dragons! Fiannlly! I have been checking this out every single day waiting for this last chapter! Thank you! Lovely story! if you ever decide to publish, definitely buying!