Nice, but sad. It seems you're not comfortable with love-stuff at that point. But it's very well written!

okay, this is faintly sad. it leaves me with this undercurrent of depression. no catharsis here.

Hmm. Nice. Short, and too the point. But good.

sadly, i can relate.

I'm glad i actually understand a poem for once =D

Wonderful. I love how you've captured one moment in time so well. Great work. Write more.

I really love this. Keep writing. :)