i'm so, so sorry that i haven't reviewed in a while ... i have too much to say that i can't in a review.

private message me, please. i'd really like to talk to you.

well, better luck next time.Talk atcha later,Alex

this is a very interesting poem... very good i may add. but very unique as well. :)~kario

keep up with the good work

this is so in-your-face and I love it so much. the part where the "scars must be something to you" was really sad. generally, I like the feel of this whole poem - sad yet full of angst. (:

i love the first three verses - an amazing way to start off...the formating is a little odd b/c it has to long stanza & 3 short ones.

but i like how this seems different from your other works...i don't know how to explain it...