I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

wow...u are quite a random person arent u?...well it's prtty gud...in a weird..i can barely understand wat's going on kinda way

COOL, I have to read more of this. SO hilarious

Um, yeah.

Oh, okay, I do. But other than me...

And yes, the fire story did give me a bit of a chuckle. Ha ha. See?

I thought this was going to be another one of those gay 'oh no my story was plagerised, and because I think I'm better than all of you - even though I can't write for ** but I have cliched high-school plots - I'm going to take them down because one day I'm going to get published and get famous'. NEWS FLASH, people: it is highly doubtful that even ONE of you is going to get published, and certainly not with the majority of what is essentially ** posted on this site.

Yeah. You might've guessed, but those are really ** me off. Especially the stories with that are so bad they're shocking, and then they don't even have the decency to get a lot of reviews so they can pretend they're important, but they still think that they are and that people will actually care if they get all outraged and take their stories off the site. GOOD RIDDANCE!

I absolutely love your story!
I especially love all your characters; they are so believable and relatable.
For example Fielding’s relationship with Adelaide. In so many other stories people have a tendency to make the older brother over protective about everything, some kind of saint that never slags off the sister for fun, as someone with an older brother I find it really hard to accept that!
I even find Adelaide really easy to relate too, which is kinda disturbing.

Btw I first read this story about a year ago; sorry it's taken me so long to review!

FINALLY! IT ONLY TOOK ME ABOUT FIVE FRICKEN HOURS TO FIND A CHAPTER I HADNT REVIEWED YET SO SO I COULD REVIEW!

Point is, mate, take that ** thing off 'signed'. It's really, really annoying.

Coupla points: One) don't take any notice of the copious amounts of typos in here, we just got a new keyboard that I HATE because it's too springy and the shift button is like half the size it used to be so \i kepp pressing the slash button.

Two) for the last time, rain coat is not my other account, although i admit we do have similiar styles. if you want ill get some evidence... hm. okay. i got it. for one, hers says that shes old enough to drink and drive whereas i have a couple of months until i can do that too. and also the whole 'bushfire' thing, i think the one that she was in was in churchill/dargo, whereas the one that is currently covering out house with smoke is the kinglake/murrindindi. not that you care that we're about to be burnt down, but whatever.

um, oh yeah, crit. well, was a lil bit annoyed by your zealous over-use of adjectives, to be honest. other than that, great. although it still doesnt seem like a cliche just yet, but you know... the whole 'spanish' cliche, maybe...?

anyway. i have to go to work now. fun, seeing nobody comes in at all in the middle fo the frickin day except for bums. not the point. anyway, the thingy majiggy was good, k?

So I'm pretty much in love with Adelaide at the moment. I guess I'm now batting for the other team... or just for Adelaide since she's so awesome.

I'm like totally in like love with her.

You are awesome. And the Forrester's Guide thingies are always a laugh. I would so buy a guide like that and I don't buy books much. I love the characters. They're all so unique, even Beefy Chuck.

I think the teachers are awesome. And her grandfather is the best, hands down. He beats everyone. And that Catch scene was totally hilarious. I especially liked how her grandparents didn't say anything to see how she'd deal with it.

In conclusion, I wish I lived where Adelaide lived.

So I have a proposal for Adelaide and I'd very much like it if you passed it on.
"Will you marry me?"

If you wanted to join in, I wouldn't mind polygamy. *winkwink*

merci pour la magnifique histoire. (you always use spanish, let's see you decipher some french... it probably doesn't make sense much.)

update soon. i'll be waiting with bated breath.

This is great! I love the main character already! She's awesome. Ahahaha. She's so funny, really. I swear I'd love to be her friend. A laugh and a half, I tell you.
XD
I probably sounded like an old lady.

Anyway. I don't think you used the "If looks could kill, my profession would be staring," line properly.

Because doesn't that mean Josephine wants to kill the guy she previously called hot?
I tried looking at the sentence in different ways if it could still fit somehow, but no dice.

Well, I'm going to read the rest now. Since this is so interesting! =)

My God you are a writing Genius!, please update

I'm terrible at reviewing, but I'll say this:
Nice.

DUDETTE DUDETTE! Man can you believe i forgot about this sorry. I stopped reading fiction press for ages being busy with life and i remembered this story today and spent hours trying to find it! (I couldn't remember the name. And then to realize that you haven't updated in like a year, come on kit kat thats just not cool. This is a an awesome story, so freaking funny, you simply must finish it! Or post an equally funny story.
Hope to see more soon!

I'm really liking the story so far. It's interesting and fun. However, I did spot one (Possible? I can't really tell yet with the character), and that's the whole riding elephants/circus thing, because in the previous chapter you said that she was afraid of animals. Anyway. Other than that, great story!

HA HA this story has been great so far

and i know you said that Adelaide's not disabled but with her short attention span and eccentricity her thinking reminds me of that of a ten year old!! its so awesome though!!

Huh. I honestly don't doubt for a second that those caffiene mints are full of caffiene. (That is a really annoying word to write. Mostly because I think I'm spelling it wrong. Caffiene. Caffeine. Hmm.)

So, what, you think I'm your ** or something? Think you can just IGNORE me for months and then ABUSE ME? Oh, ew... just... no. Disregard that sentence completely. I'd delete it but I'm too lazy.

Anyway, if you must know, I am writing something. 50,177 words so far of something. All of which is unposted and won't be posted on an account that you know of... ha!

Not entirely sure what you meant about the 'just for you' bit. Whether that was an insinuation that the character was based on me... in which case, that's not entirely nice of you. Or at least it wouldn't be if I could still remember what you wrote.

You have ten days left of school. Big deal. Have fun out in the real world, won't you. Paying your own college fees. I've still got something like... I dunno. About 450, maybe. Of course this would be less if I was in school in America, but even so, I don't have to pay for my school fees yet!

Although I am trying to change out of Lit, mostly because I haven't got a clue of what we're doing - I just ** my way through all our sacs - and also, we have to present a monologue in front of the class. And not just any monologue. A monologue from the point of view of a character from Jane Eyre. Can you BELIEVE that? What the ** do you write for that? 'Oh yes, Mr Rochester, you do look dashing with those third degree burns covering your body!'? Not to mention the people in my class are all pretencious arseholes.

Anyway. Write something. Post it. That way I can spam it instead of this from now on.