This story is exactly what I've been wanting to read. And so far, it has excellent writing. So, please continue soon.

wow, this really intrigues me. i'll deifnitely be back for more (just remind me to review, i always forget). i've never exactly read something like this (well, of course, i've read the hapless love tragedy.. i WAS there for romeo and juliet) but, not in this setting. plus, i know VERY little about that culture, so, it will be interesting to see things like this. :D yup.

looking forward to more!