forget rewriting "Fortune Teller" this baby needs a sequel!

lol, I lve that Emma's middle name wasn't Jean. Such a funny story. My great grandmother's name really was Emma Jean, and your Emma Ruth/Jean reminds me a bit of her. Great story.

dude, i thought this story's finished until i read the an. lol
okay soo update soon!

I love the story, I love the Plot.There was one thing that I thought wasn't really necessary in the story.The whole "Jesus" part. I mean not a lot of people believe that Jesus Christ is the son of god. I personally believe that if you ever wanted to get it published yes you can add a part about relegion but never get to deep because some might not like it and some might think its offensive and if it was published internationally, I think this will be an obstacle for non-believers,Jews,Muslims and others. I hope you dont take offence on this but I know writer like to get constructive critiszm and this will help you I think later on.Other than that I loved the stories, the charecters and the progression of everything. One of my favourite stories on Fiction Press.

great story !
but who is chastity's father??
well biological father...

i stumbled onto your story by accident, and i like it. It's nice to see a romance where feelings and interactions develope over time and the readers get to see the change and developement. There are too many stories out there where the characters jump to sex or to the conclusion that they love each other without much interactions between them to build up to the conclusion of love. Am i making sense? hehe

Anyway, it is a good story and a good plot you have here.
-Iphy

that.. made no sense

Lovely Story.

I have to tell you that, that story was one of the most enjoyable reads I've had in a long time. Comming from an old Catholic family where half my friends siblings are becoming a priest or a nun (of sorts) it's so refreshing to finally read a story where morals exist. Morals such as chasity, and a belief in god. However, it doesn't control the whole story, it was wonderful. It was a very touching story, and beautifully written. I could feel my own heart pumping when Randy was looking through those pictures and figured out he was in love with her. This is a rather long review I know, but I just had to say, I personally thought it was definitly one of the better stories I've read.

that was a really cute story! i liked it lots :) sequel? maybe?

Im so utterly confuzzled. I dont get any part of the last chapter. Is he dead or something? Maybe it's just that i havent slept in like 40 hours but I just dont get what happened. or where reme is. or who the man surrounded by children is. other than that this was such a great story, i loved it to pieces.

This is one of the mosty bea-ut-ifl storie i've ever read. i absolutely love it.

*breaths sigh of relief* he's the brother not the father. now i'm happy :) amazing nd to the story :)

lovely story! your writing style is very unique. i like the plot and the characters, although your organization could use some improvement. some parts were very random and seemed out of place. hope you'll take that into consideration and i look forward to hearing more stories from you.

Nice ending!I did read both versions of "Redeeming McCreagan" But I don't remember replying. Anyway I liked the first one very much!