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Orual 2007-06-03 . chapter 1
"My dreams are better, / Than waking up with you." You're right. That is cold. Still, it was rather fascinating and (from what I can tell from my immense insight into the human psyche) true of how people view certain romantic relationships as disposable. You really surprised me the first time I came to "My dreams are better, / Than waking up with you." It's just going along, typical love poem, and then WHAM! I liked that, though I have to wonder whether that makes the first couplet untrue. Hm. Interesting stuff, in any case.
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