i like how this is a poem in a story. it's really a great way of combining. i also really love your short sentences- they really add to the mood of the piece. this really gets the feelings across. great job!

-Lefty

read this one before...

loved it then and love it now )

i don't know...chalk it up to recent lack of ficpress on my part but i got all sad and emo and felt it reading this.

*sniff*

sucker for the soppy romance again

aw i like this. love the poem. tis very cute.

stupid notification thing takes forever.

i like this story. LOVE the poem. "So as I close this stupid poem" lol

like the traffic analogy...

Zücher?

ltomm!

and post up loving hate! thats cool.