I love this story, oh so much! ^^
Please update soon =] =] =]

Oh I loved the last line! I somehow saw it coming but it was still really cool!! =D
Well done on this chpater! I'm taking reading this story slow, but I'll get back to reading Chapte 3 as soon as I'm back from camping next week ^^

D; Aw. Almost Aw. But not really. ;P

Vincent is so cute, I was sad he wasn't in this chapter D; He's like a...Kewt Fluffy declawed kitten :D

:D Lovely chapter (and story in general ;3)

this story is amazing i rlly wish you would continue it :)

Cute story, but you make me sad... I want that to be the Blake and Adam from the other story (almost typed in 'Blaise and Adam' -- my characters, scary how close the names are). Anyway... Awesome story. I personally support Devon and Vincent ^_^ -- Just cause. Awesome man!
l0v3,
P01s0n

Oh. He is so gay. It's scary how homosexual he acts. Anyhow. Lovely story.

I can't wait for your next update.

Ahaha. This update made me laugh. I really needed that. His zitty crisis was great. xD

I had a feeling he was giving advice to competition at the end there. Agh.

Amusing.

xo

hahahah. that is so funny. he is like a closet straight guy. imagine if he got set up with another guy. now that would be funny!!

Most original thing I have read in a long time.
It's also hilarious.
AND AWH POOR EMO TURTLE!
Lmfao

Oh so sad 4 Devon. He sounds like a cutie too bad Michelle hasn't harboured feelings 4 him. Anyways update soon

hee hee.
this is good.
funny.
normally it's a gay guy pretending to be straight.
BUT NOT THIS TIME! nope.
hee hee, this story makes me laugh.
olivia is just a little kewl! she amused me greatly.
well tata
continue writing please.

update

XD Gayest... Ahaha poor, poor boy.

WHAT AN IDIOT! He should've came out... The only plus side I can think of about this is that if she invites him to an all-girl sleepover. Ahaha.

Heh. Poor, poor Devon. (I like the word 'poor' today...) He
should come to school in a stained wife-beater and ripped jeans, scratching his ** with one hand while guzzling beer with the other. (though he might get kicked out of school...but it would make him seem a little less gay.)

You know, I find it really creepy when guys refer to girls as goddesses, but I always refer to hot guys as gods. I'm sexist.


Devon, you **! COME CLEAN!

xo

Devon's adorable too. =]