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| Lac3d w1th p01s0n 2008-03-22 ch 4,  | abuseCute story, but you make me sad... I want that to be the Blake and Adam from the other story (almost typed in 'Blaise and Adam' -- my characters, scary how close the names are). Anyway... Awesome story. I personally support Devon and Vincent ^_^ -- Just cause. Awesome man! l0v3, P01s0n |
| Casey.Duh 2008-01-02 ch 4, | abuseOh. He is so gay. It's scary how homosexual he acts. Anyhow. Lovely story. |
| Gravilove19 2007-12-15 ch 4, | abuseI can't wait for your next update. |
| SerialXLain 2007-11-26 ch 4, | abuseAhaha. This update made me laugh. I really needed that. His zitty crisis was great. xD I had a feeling he was giving advice to competition at the end there. Agh. Amusing. xo |
| caramel blazers 2007-10-31 ch 4, | abusehahahah. that is so funny. he is like a closet straight guy. imagine if he got set up with another guy. now that would be funny!! |
| Georgianna 2007-10-29 ch 4, | abuseMost original thing I have read in a long time. It's also hilarious. AND AWH POOR EMO TURTLE! Lmfao |
| tancsadesgal 2007-10-29 ch 4, | abuseOh so sad 4 Devon. He sounds like a cutie too bad Michelle hasn't harboured feelings 4 him. Anyways update soon |
| Wolf bathed in Star-light 2007-02-15 ch 3, | abusehee hee. this is good. funny. normally it's a gay guy pretending to be straight. BUT NOT THIS TIME! nope. hee hee, this story makes me laugh. olivia is just a little kewl! she amused me greatly. well tata continue writing please. |
| Zachery S. Mills 2007-01-26 ch 3, | abuseupdate |
| SerialXLain 2007-01-11 ch 3, | abuseXD Gayest... Ahaha poor, poor boy. WHAT AN IDIOT! He should've came out... The only plus side I can think of about this is that if she invites him to an all-girl sleepover. Ahaha. Heh. Poor, poor Devon. (I like the word 'poor' today...) He should come to school in a stained wife-beater and ripped jeans, scratching his ** with one hand while guzzling beer with the other. (though he might get kicked out of school...but it would make him seem a little less gay.) You know, I find it really creepy when guys refer to girls as goddesses, but I always refer to hot guys as gods. I'm sexist. Devon, you **! COME CLEAN! xo |
| BrokenDreamz-EmptySoulz 2007-01-05 ch 3, | abuseDevon's adorable too. =] |
| HelloLonely 2007-01-04 ch 3, | abuseAha, I loved loved this chapter! Made me laugh so damn hard xDD And 'The Emo Turtle'? Bloody brilliant! I really liked Devon's personality, very humorous and cute - In fact, that's a little bit of how my brain works O.o righty... I really liked the lunch part with Devon and Keith. The whole "I roll my eyes. “The emo turtle is on his lunch break.”" xD And afterwards are really funny. Overall to say, you're one of my favorite authors. you have a great approach to making things funny :P Ah, I'm sure Michelle will fnd some great clothes ;] Please update soon! xox |
| Lexi Elizabeth Walker 2007-01-01 ch 3, | abusei cannot believe what he's doing! ah that's soo horrible. he shouldnt lie to her. it'll only make things worse in the end. |
| mandraco 2006-12-27 ch 3, | abuseTurtles are cool and all, but I don't know why anyone would want to go by the Emo Turtle. I also would not ask the Emo Turtle for advice. But your plot seems to be chugging along nicely. =) Mandraco. |
| Jing! 2006-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI find it hilarious you made his hometown Shanghai. I think I'll pester you to keep writing :P |