 Adora Bell 2006-10-02 . chapter 2Nice. Funny but I can't help thinking of what would happen if Angela found the picture.-Kat |
 Tomoyuki Tanaka 2006-09-30 . chapter 2Unfortunately, I haven't played any game like that... |
 Niki Tori 2006-09-29 . chapter 2I DO I DO WANNA PRESS THE REVIEW BUTTON!! And look I did! YaY ME!!
Now on to the reviewing. Very funny beginning! I likie this chappie!! It really was good no doubts there. This is going into my favs. Okay-okay...enough blabbering from me...
Until chappie 2(Which I can't wait to read)
LoVe,
Niki!! |
 Niki Tori 2006-09-29 . chapter 1WOO I PUSHED THE SHINY REVIEW BUTTON!
What now?
Oh yeah reviewing the introduction!
Interesting... VERY INTERESTING!!(Eyes Widen)
YES VERY INTERESTING INDEED!
I had to much sugar today. But it is a good intro! I'll be moving onto chappie one...
Until Next Time
LoVe Ya!!
Niki! |
 shadowcat86 2006-09-29 . chapter 2Like I said before, FUNNY!
Sorry for the sorta not so long review before,
My REAL name is Faith (not gettin' more out than that)
I'm usually fairly relaxed (or lazy), even though I have an EXTREMELY short fuse.
I have brownish-blondish hair, and eyes that are sorta green and sorta blue. I'm about 5'5, and my weight is -pounds.
I'm sarcastic sometimes, and like joking around. I LOVE randomness and weirdness, both of which I am. I HATE assumptions. |
 Ollie May 2006-09-28 . chapter 1Fantastic! I'm very impressed with this idea, it could shape up to be something wicked cool.
One question though, is this going to be a manga/anime story or are there going to be other types of stories in here as well? I would be more than happy to contribute some of my characters but they don't fall into the anime category.
I'll be the first to admit I'm out of my element with all of the japanese words/characters but I'm too curious to see where y'all take this to give up on it because of my ignorance.
Most fabulous, please continue with this soon!
Ollie May |
 codyismypup 2006-09-27 . chapter 1I so want to be in it! Okay, my name's Avey and to make it easy, I'm blonde, green eyed. 5'4. People say my best feature is my face and say I'm attractive enought o be a model ( yeah right but I'll just put it here) but I'm too short. like I'd want to be one,hah. I'm sarcastic, loud yet shy with a soft loud voice (oh oxymoron!). Wow, I sound desperate. Anyways, This is an awesome idea! how'd you think of it? |
 Outlaw02 Extreme 2006-09-27 . chapter 2Hey there, Outlaw-2 here,
So, I have a contender, against my Sasaki Senior High School series... >:) Lol, Just kidding. I must say, it does feel like an eroge game (In fact, I do play some H-games myself XD. And guess what? I'm just 17! No wonder I mature too fast.) I'm still waiting for the humour to kick in.
Anyway, this really kicked me in the butt to resume my writing on Sasaki Senior High School 2. Yep, writing along with the 4th chapter of Tokyo Battalions, I'm writing the 6th chapter of Sasaki Senior High School 2. XD Anyway, I'll be waiting... :p
Sincerely,
Outlaw-2 |
 Durandel 2006-09-26 . chapter 2Eheh, wierd, but intresring, and you said I need a full profile of who I want in this? Well you already know Seth, as about me... I'm laidback and do tend to space out sometimes, I really don't like arrogant people or the ones that give up, I'm fit and like to play sports, soccer is the key, I have brown hair and brown eyes, hope that sums it up. And the way Ginji imagines things is kinda weird, are we talking about the same guy frm the prolouge? Because if he said he wasn't an otaku he's lieing out of his but. But this story is really good, and I can't wait till the update.
P.S. I volunteer to work on the next chapter of Wish. |
 SirScott 2006-09-26 . chapter 2Maybe, is fanasty will come true.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~ |
 Durandel 2006-09-26 . chapter 1Ragnarok here.
I'm so sorry for being off so long, but the truth is that I've had this nagging writers block looing over my for the past few weeks, but anyways, on to the review.
This seems intresting and I would love to have myself as a character in here, that would be so cool! I like the idea's for your charaters to, especially Dante being a teacher, I shudder to thing what Detentions are like with him... If I put Seth in this story, which I wonder is alright, I would make him a... Math teacher, it would be knda cool, considering he's 16 and all, or you can make him older, whichever, as long as he's in there and you dont make him out of character. On to the next! |
 ainedamdz 2006-09-26 . chapter 2Er, right.. That was a bit hentaish... Anyway, some kind of confusion in the middle part (It surprised !!Shinji!!, as Angela pecked !!her!! in the ear and whispered, “I love you too…”), but that's okay. So, uhm... could a character of mine be in your story?! (Yargh I never thought I'd ask this!!)
Have you read my story FLUNK? Kentoshi seems cool (and fitting for this story as the theme's kinda hentai), maybe he could have a small part in one of your future chapters? Oh, and I'm not asking you to read my story, so here's a quick recap of Kentoshi's 'tude..
Kentoshi Narusana, 15 y/o, freshman, 152 cm in height (that's really short for a guy since it's only about..5'1), black hair (nape length), honey colored eyes, effeminate body, vain, and the greatest egotistical liar ever. Btw, he gets stuck in this stupid wishing booth which turns him into a girl, so he ends up going to school as Riku Kawayi... Incidentally, his/her?? bestfriend Onisuke Mitsugi develops a huge crush on him/her, not knowing that Riku is in fact Kentoshi.
BLAH! That was long... Well, I'm not forcing you guys, it's your own story anyway. Nyah, this is getting too long. Okay then... I like this one and I hope y'all update soon!! |
 Laughing Facade 2006-09-26 . chapter 2aww this was really good =) i really want to be a character in this story =)...so i've got the whole girl next door look going on i have long straight brown hair, round brown eyes, a heart shaped face, full lips and a thin nose. I'm klumsy as hell and i tend to say the most random and insane things. I'm mexican and my english is a little bumpy(?) but pretty fluent. I'm usualy not shy and rarely get embarrased but when i do i blush furiosly. i always wear black and i can't leave home without my ipod. i don't have any brothers or sisters. I would soo love to be part of a cliché. Ok hope that's enough and i hope u consider putting me on your story=) Oh and my name is Conni (yeah like connie but without an e) |
 felicia13 2006-09-26 . chapter 2Wow. I've never felt so out of the loop here. Why does every except me seem to know what these Japanese terms mean?
I've decided against joining this, too. Just so you all know.
On the other hand ... there should be an aerial acrobatics class. Because it's fun. If you want the full story behind it, e-mail me. Anywho, it HAS to be in there, even I don't join. Which I won't. It HAS TO BE!
Felicia. |
 SympleSymon 2006-09-26 . chapter 2Woo! Someone's taking their crush to the extent of obssession! But that's always cool, as long as chainsaws never end up in the mix.
Nice start, can't wait for the second partWill Angela break Ginji's heart?Excuse me for I have to - *gagged*
SympleSymon
PS: Part Four of "Chinwan! Volume 1" (it's so long, I thought I might as well make it into volumes of ten or less parts, so people aren't faced with one long story they would probably get bored off...just like real manga books XD) is up, if you have the time...and I'm just typing-up Part Five now, Chinwan's first battle! Look forward to hearing from you. |
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