oh god. i love it. empathized very painfully with the first stanza. perfection in so few words. and the last three lines like a mantra. ...

ohh...i like that "orphan boy and orphan girl"...and the title seems to be suggesting something that is to be implied by the reader...

this is so great...

truly yours...

This is gorgeous. I loved it.

'and you cry
and you cry
and you cry'

i just love that. repeating it three times make the reader sit back and realise the full potential of those three words.
this poem was short, but it flowed beautifully. 'sometimes it feels like summer/our fingers entangled' - i like the word entangled here - it creates the image that it is all messed up but it is still good.
love it! *favourites*

I really like the tragic overtone of this. I like how it can be relatable in several ways. Great job.

the hopelessness is almost palpable. its so sad :(. i mean, they are little kids! and eventually theyre crying and breaking apart. amazing, how well it is captured. "against the green of the world" probably the most awesome line ever. the only thing is, i wanted more, at the end. it felt incomplete, or it made me feel cliffhung. that might have been your point, however. so great job, regardless. :)

love, c.induced.

This is one of those really simple poems that just says a lot in a few short words. I love the ending, how you repeated "and you cry" and how you put them each on their own line. Very sad. Keep writing! :)

Truly good poem. I haven't been around for a while, but your work still holds that beauty that just amazes me.

and it makes *me* want to cry. gorgeous.

♥Christine

Oh God... beautiful. I love how it ends, just like, repeat, lovely and pretty.

i love the way you've repeated the last lines three times.

why so sad? ~*

The rhythm is really cool is in this and you do a great job of rhyming (something that usually annoys me but in this its great.) Nice job.