I love it! It's very true, some things just have to be done alone.

I loved the use of musical terms in there, it gives it a flair of...how to say it, formality? Grace, suaveness? It gives the impression of the poem being very formal and haughty, almost, the same way one would imagine the woman who dances alone being.

Haha, it takes a special student to respect musical terminology. I mean, I've never gotten angry at a band director for telling me to finger my parts or f around the room.

I love this, Demyx. I've been meaning to come and read your stuff forever, I like it a lot. Nice.
~Sara.

x) Demyx, this is so good. I wish I could write stuff like this.

I'm favorite-authoring you. =D

I really liked the picture this gave me! I think it's very well-written, and it flows very nicely.

I cannot thinkof one word to describe this poem, but te first one that came to mind was lovely. Glad you submitted something new!! I love your poetry!

^.^~Arf~

Excellent. It's a creative idea, one that I hadn't really thought about. It wraps up nicely, the rhymes aren't forced (kudos for that!), and it just fits together really well.

I especially love the line "done with one but meant for two". Don't know why, but I do.

Good job, keep it up!

This is really a fun poem. Once again you are rhythmically solid.

"the music finally starts to retard" Is there another word that you could use other than retard? I don't like it.

I like your rhyme scheme, it is very effective, aside from retard none of the lines seem forced.

Cheers.

wow...

Rebellion Author.

nice job, i always love poems about dancing, and this one especially...since "dance with me? not a chance" is all too common for me to hear... :)

i love the flow of this poem, it's really good. and you say you're only thirteen? it reads like you're older...which is not such a bad thing.

-- devil in a midnight mass

ps: thanks for the review :)