The title is what made me want to read it. I enjoyed this one.

I love it. It's kind of creepy and intense.

im not quite sure i understand this, but thats part of the reason i like it, i think. great ending.

Nicely done! I love the ending "I Smile". This was great!

nice, i like it, don't know of a title maybe scream would work. but dunno, keep writing

Thank you very much for reading that essay. I'm surprised you actually read the whole thing, as I know most people would become too bored to finish. Never mind the essay though, it is the only essay, aside from the pseudo-essay "Why?", that I will be posting.

It's a good poem, but I'm not sure what else to say about it.

-Sam(uel)

wow i definitely know how that feels...lol

great job!

Very good. I'm not sure what it is about it, but I really like it. Good job.

Scary!...but good

hey i liked this! loland i think the title is perfect for it... it makes sense ya know?

Scary! Well expressed. Keep writing!

Anna _

Wow, that's very surrealistic, somehow fits as a description of a drug trip, very engaging style.