Damn sweet

Damn

aw omg i LOVE the last paragraph P

it's so sweet

but why is she mad though? lol

no problem...it's still an awesome story LOVE IT ]

awwe! It's so cute!

The only thing is there's some sentences that need commas etc.

But so cute!

I'm a mushy pile right now.

-.-U

o shoot... i never actually finished the story... wow that was a lot better then i thought O_O i read the first two chapters and i kind of missed the 3rd one O_O DANG this is good too D

oo dang this was a while back O_O dang you started early no wonder youre so good D

LOVED IT!

It was totally awsome XD very well written and I absolutely adored the story plot ]

So well done! great job and keep it up!]

RL

Cute. Sorry, I'm exhausted and therefore can't leave a coherent review, so...very cool.

Dude that ending was definetly good enough. It was wicked sweet!

this just gave me the worst case of

butterflies and weak knees. good job.

xof

u should update soon, there needs to be an end

I love your main characters. They aren't those perfect little things you see all the time. I love this story, and I'm sad to see that it's just a short story. So much potential! Keep writing.

Wonderful. I love your descriptive narrations. Beautifully done.

Oh wow, this is really well written. I'm looking forward to reading the next.

M-azing.I can't to find out what happens soin and keep up the good work!