|Reviews for Phoenix Tears|
| Swift Sunrise 3/12/07 . chapter 1
I seriously love this poem. I like that "Yet here I am/ with this phoenix of feeling" those lines (and the two after them) just fir so perfectly. I also liked the end stanza. Very poetic. Not all poetry has to be rhyming.
also, please review any of my stuff if you have time? :)
| NO LONGER USING 9/24/06 . chapter 1
This is deep like all of your other poetry and I love it. The words fit every line so perfectly and I enjoyed reading it a lot. I don't think you necesarily need an introduction, because the poem speaks for itself as you said, but it's your poem so do as you wish. Great work otherwise. I' .Enough