Hmm, seems like a good start for a story. Though im not too sure I understand the ending. Over all, good job. Keep writing! ^ ^

Hello, I have just read your story(obviously) and you write very well^_^ I loved the whole mood of your oneshot, the rain adding a lovely effect to the overall of everything. You could explain things a bit more, but then again some people don't like to go intricate with detail. Although short and with a bit of a weird ending, I loved it!

i don't really get it.
there wasn't really much of a plot though so i guess there was nothing to get...

this is a good start. it was really cute. but how old are these boys? i kind of pictured that they were smaller. idk. maybe teen years...ish? still very cute. i liked it.

Hehe. Nice.
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