Ooh, very deep and wonderfully written. I especially enjoyed the last line, and you grasped the definition of time...or timelessness rather, into three little lines. Keep it up!

The sands of time... very good.

One note: "falls" should probably be "fall." But that means you will have to work on the last line. That change is up to you.

phantom_jedi

Wow, that makes me really sad, but it was excellently written! Keep up the good work and thanks so much for the review!

"grains of sand freely falls in" - that is eerily timeless. It made me think of sinking pits of sand, and then of that sand-clock-thing (I can't remember what it's called). Nice job!

Very visual and thought provoking. Good haiku.