|Reviews for Timeless|
| Stormie Greye 11/1/06 . chapter 1
Ooh, very deep and wonderfully written. I especially enjoyed the last line, and you grasped the definition of time...or timelessness rather, into three little lines. Keep it up!
| phantom-jedi 10/2/06 . chapter 1
The sands of time... very good.
One note: "falls" should probably be "fall." But that means you will have to work on the last line. That change is up to you.
| PocoSnow15 9/26/06 . chapter 1
Wow, that makes me really sad, but it was excellently written! Keep up the good work and thanks so much for the review!
| Zamie Kull 9/24/06 . chapter 1
"grains of sand freely falls in" - that is eerily timeless. It made me think of sinking pits of sand, and then of that sand-clock-thing (I can't remember what it's called). Nice job!
| Moondog Dozier 9/24/06 . chapter 1
Very visual and thought provoking. Good haiku.