Ah,this brings back childhood memories. I've always wanted to be a ballerina. Tutus, ballet flats, leaping, being flailed around by a man in tights. Good stuff, good stuff.

Yeah, green tea is pretty fantabulous.

Thanks for the review, doll.

~Mishiema

Beautifully done! Write on.

This was very adorable, reminisces of a timeless innocence forever sealed deep in our hearts. At least that's what I got from this...

i really liked this. as was said earlier, the second stanza is the strongest and is clearest in my mind. it's beautiful. (: one little thing about it, though -- grammatically, it should be "bottoms" instead of "bottom", since feet is plural. other than that, great work. keep it up.

yes, this is a pretty poem. the second stanza is best, and i love the imaginary in this. nice work.~Bex xx

I agree, the poem was wonderful and my favourite stanza was the second.

This is truly beautiful. I enjoyed it. Good job.

I especially enjoyed reading the second stanza. Great! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^