This one's definitely going to my favorites! Amazing!

It seems like such a simple piece but it's so good! I love this poem; it's getting added to my faves.

By the way, thanks more your reviews on my poems ~ you rock *^_^*

Happy Writing!

~Jazzie Kings

beautiful..

adding you to my favs.

You have a lot of potential. I really like this piece. This is a testiment to being concise. It does not take many words to get a powerful statement across, and I think you did that very well here. Keep writing! You have a wonderful talent.

-The Lady Draco-

I really liked the image, so simple and basic, but touches me nonetheless. It reminds me of a really good painting.

But you know, this piece still feels a bit incomplete, perhaps there's more to this than what you have already written.

But if you like this the way it is, then who am I to decide it's length. Still a very good piece.

That's such a beautiful, well written piece. Well done!