|Reviews for Manslaughter is deliberate|
| magnusthewolf 10/7/06 . chapter 1
nice, vivid images, and you can almost see, smell, and taste your wods...well done!
| give me back my childhood 9/29/06 . chapter 1
this was so, powerful. (: like the line "staining the porcelain red with my love" was like woah. I imagined someone's heart bleeding on kitchen tiles. like the shirt is being stained and it's just bleeding as the guy walks out. I like the whole picture the poem portrays. and a lot of words that you used were just like, perfect. (:
| Chaos Apple 9/28/06 . chapter 1
Fuck, darling, this is Wonderful.
I adore all the imagery you used-this poem is perfect with it's flow and vivid descriptions.
Gorgeous. Fantastic. I think this is my new drug, doll face.
| Luma 9/26/06 . chapter 1
This is great, I love it - the intensity of the emotions and everything. I particulary liked the last three lines. Keep writing!
And thanks for the review :)
| theatrical rhapsodies 9/25/06 . chapter 1
I really liked this one. Great job with it!
Is it ok if I put your poem "Looking But Not Seeing" in my Fictionpress profile as my favoret poem? And don't worry I'll give you the credit for it. I just really love that poem. Thank you.
| Margot Tenenbaum 9/24/06 . chapter 1
i love the feeling of apathy and indifference portrayed by the secondary party. it really contrasts the obvious need of the other person.
and thank you for reviewing my poem!
| fading innocence 9/24/06 . chapter 1
Ooh. Very, very good. I love that you used the word "cannabis" (I swear I'm in the wrong grade, every time I mention 'cannabis' while they're talking about drugs they go like 'Huh? What does that have to do with drugs?'. Frickin' morons.)
I liked the personification "the door screams as you walk out", and if I had been given that line as a prompt, I probably would have written after it (in italics) 'But if you won't listen to mine, it's probably doomed.'
Yeah, I'm a weirdo.
Angst is my crack, yo.
Off to take my medication now.
'dazzle me with your hypocrisy'
| a lonely september 9/24/06 . chapter 1
oh shit. this is incredible. so painful and just so much to it. it's a fave.
| polka dots and addictions 9/24/06 . chapter 1
"staining the porcelain red with my love"ah, what a fantasic line. I love some of the combuinations of words you've used in this, keep writing )