ohh i love stories like this. you are an awesome author!

this is good. i like the angst and the emotion inside, and the way it feels so real to me. nice work.

I like the point of view. All the "You..."s are a good way to write this I think. Look at all the angst. LOL

Wow. This is amazing. It would be cool if you could eventually make a story out of this, but it you don't, its understandable. I used to be in a situation like this, except for the fact that the guy moved away before we could ever become really good friends.

Oh my GAWD! I felt tears welling in my eyes. This really brings back memories... I can remember a time when I felt this EXACT same way... Great job, honey. You really know how to salt a wound/ slit a scar.

I liked it...:) Very raw and real...

I like I like.I use to know the feeling then it went away knowing he can never feel the same.

I know the feeling.

Wow. Seriously. There is so much emotion in this...

And I don't think you cheated by using 'you.' I think you made it more personable, so that as a reader, we could delve in and relate. It made it much more raw and realistic.

Amazing job.

this is so truee and i hate it =( arg it makes me so madd !! good work !!=)

Beautifully written. I love how you describe the hearbreak while he looks on unawares. Very realistic. I'm sorry that you have had to go through something similar. It's not very pleasant (I speak from experience).