   I be a poet lost in morbidity 2009-06-05 . chapter 1This is good. favourite. |
 Yusuf 2009-05-08 . chapter 1:) that would be an awesome place to go.
~Yusuf |
 Demented Circus Tour Guide 2008-08-17 . chapter 1TAKE ME WITH YOU~ |
 kloun mannequin 2008-06-13 . chapter 1they are nice wishes. |
 Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 . chapter 1Nice poem.
~Twilight Starr~ |
 DE Campbell 2007-03-08 . chapter 1I really like this poem. It is short, and sweet. It describes a place that everyone wants to go! Good job! Keep writing! |
 je suis une pomme du terre. 2007-03-08 . chapter 1This was very good but I really was expecting more when it ended. It seemed like you had more to say and stopped right in the middle. Maybe you should consider doing a second poem to elaborate a little bit more, maybe a companion poem called Kingdom of Dreams or something like that... I dunno, it's just my opinion ^.^ Overall good job.
~~>T.H. |
 PocoSnow15 2006-09-24 . chapter 1Wow! Great job! I feel the same way most of the time... |
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