interesting. i can't wait to see what happens next! _

I liked it mucho. it seems so mysterious and very interesting. uno problemo. there just seems so much little detail into the story. other than that, i'm looking forward to read more. _

Absolutely love the title. There's something creepy about this. It's very vivid and beautiful somehow. The only flaw I find is that I don't feel like I'm there, it's all written from a POV too far away, it tells too much and doesn't really show or...well to put it better, it never goes into much detail. Good job!

Okie, i added ur story. unfortunately, i don't have time to read it, but it does definitely sound interesting and perrty origonal. _

I like your first chapter, very good. This sounds really interesting. I like your writing and how you made Sierra the outter person of the crew.

Please update soon!