Well well well. Great story, love. I'm definitely obsessed with your lyric trademark. Plus, I know all the songs!! (well..except for that one...what was it called again?) But anyway I really think that your hard work payed off with this story. It turned out great! I love the main character's androgyny. The freakish goth seems so familiar to me...maybe I've seen her around. But I love the way the story flows from the main character waiting for the bus up to the point where he's at the goth girl's house. I really really like this story..it's funny, aberrant, and just cool. Well can't wait for the next one!

hahahhahah nice, yet odd XD

i found that sexy buff dude awesome. these characters are so people i expect from you and am at the same time surprised to find randomly in the story. yeah i don't make sense, but this is fine as your story didn't make much sense either. which is beautiful. randomness is art and you is an arteest. i'm happy about the way the narrator just takes off at the end, leaving everything he/she was afraid of behind. i dunno... i just liked it.

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