|Reviews for Hiding|
| a silenced revolution 4/28/07 . chapter 1
Found out what? 8O
I love the mystery.
| KingdomRain 10/19/06 . chapter 1
i like the last two lines. i dont know how to explain but it adds a little mystery to it in a way. like who or what were they hidding from. anyways, i really like this.
| rira-chan 10/11/06 . chapter 1
this one had a great meaning in it. i liked this one very much. great job!
| blue.eyes.can.be.deceiving 10/9/06 . chapter 1
great poem. i loved writing.!Ashlyn!
| bipedalcooney 9/27/06 . chapter 1
Nice work, I this haiku. Definatley write more.
| Basara 9/26/06 . chapter 1
| Pandakun84 9/25/06 . chapter 1
Cool. I like this! Great job!
| Ashelin 9/24/06 . chapter 1
O, this makes me think of hidden feelings and I dunno, weird stuff. Great job! God bless.-Ashelin
| S. K. Doyle 9/24/06 . chapter 1
I don't quite see this as a poem, just a comment. It achieves what it is supposed to, but there isn't much poetic language involved. I know haikus don't usually do that, but haikus also dont have a concluding couplet seperate from the body.