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| Christybell 2006-10-04 ch 1, | Oh, I like!"she's got to have some substance, surely- under the polished marble kitchen sink." Its great how you make it rhyme without making it seem forced or using those rhymes that EVERYONE uses. |
| Crossing the Rubicon 2006-09-25 ch 1, | I love the irony of the last two lines. It's just great. |
| me again 2006-09-25 ch 1, | ooh and they're both 54 words long. that's wierd, anyway, i like it, speshly 'petty little princess never noticed pea' cos that's cool |