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Christybell
2006-10-04
ch 1,
Oh, I like!"she's got to have some substance, surely-

under the polished marble kitchen sink."

Its great how you make it rhyme without making it seem forced or using those rhymes that EVERYONE uses.
Crossing the Rubicon
2006-09-25
ch 1,
I love the irony of the last two lines. It's just great.
me again
2006-09-25
ch 1,
ooh and they're both 54 words long. that's wierd, anyway, i like it, speshly 'petty little princess never noticed pea' cos that's cool
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