Nice piece--the whole thing really works. There is a push-pull feeling here that gives it a fab pace. Nothing I would change :)

I like the pace and the tone of this. Different from other works of yours. A very social voice. Well written.

Wonderful detail here. This is very well written and your wide range of vocabulary compliments your writing. Great work and definately write more!

It's been a while since I've had the pleasure to read a new poem, but it was worth the wait! A wonderful piece of work.

You always have many diverse subjects and every single one is treated with a very fresh outlook and dizzying vocabulary and imagery. It truly is a pleasure to read every time.