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| Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-09-26 ch 1,   | Your poem makes me think of lost innocence and trying to grow up to fast. It's easily relatable. EB |
| Chandra-Moon 2006-09-25 ch 1, | To me this about is about girls, going through the habit of preparing themselves in hopes of finding a man, and yet when time goes on and they haven't snared one, still going through the steps. Blind optimism. This is depressing, to be sure, but not badly written. It could be written more interestinly, but it's not cliche or dull. Keep writing. |