whoa. this is. really. wow. good stuff. i really like it. i dont think i can explain why but it's just really good and really well written. keep up the good stuff. =)

*o* I have to comment on this one!

~beautiful!~

really well thought of and put togehter too!

Wow, that was really well written o.o only thing that i could say you might want to change is the way the poem is presented (i think if you made it into stanzas it would add a lot to the meaning) and you used flaw twice xD and it sounded really repetitive the second time.

but seriously, Great stuff =)

dunno why but this stood out to me:"We only keep our old thingsSo they don’t end up on others’ shelves."